Writing stalls - Poor quality
Today I had 2 dog breed pages back, the first of 127 I submitted to a writing company about 3 weeks ago.
Well, Im disappointed to say the quality is very poor.
The quality of the content is so very poor. It's so bad it's not as if I can offer a few pointers and put them on the right track. It certainly was written by the person who wrote my first 2 test dog breed pages.
Secondly, they used an old instruction sheet I had submitted, so they weren't written to my guidelines and had about 400 words each when I wanted more than that. Ok, so that was a mix up and from now on they will use the 2nd improved instruction sheet I had submitted.
Also, it wasn't the easiest of breeds to trial out, but still thats no excuse for the quality.
I won't comment any further you can read it for yourself.
Belgian Shepherd Dog (Laekenois)
Origin/History
Laekenois is only one-fourth of the varieties of Belgian Shepherd Dog. The other three breeds include Groenendael, Tervuren, and Malinois. Belgian Shepherd Dog Laekenois and the other varieties are originally from the different places in Belgium, from which they got their names.
Ontologically, Laekenois dogs are sturdy dogs that they were used as guard dogs in the fields. Though today, much of the jobs of Laekenois still involve protection, detection and other related functions.
Appearance
Laekenois is a woolly type of dog because of its seemingly rugged coat. It actually resembles other Belgian Shepherd Dog varieties’ characteristics except for its coat. Laekenois have dark eyes, black nose, and high ears.
Colours
Laekenois usually come in mahogany and fawn colors, though, white varieties also exist. Black patches over the body are also commonplace.
Temperament
Intelligence, sturdiness, and protective skills are very intrinsic to Laekenois, which is why it is partly used in herding and other guarding purposes. Though it appears so strong, Laekonois is affectionate and loyal. It welcomes and enjoys relationships; therefore, it must be socialized at an early age.
Common Health Problems
There were cases of epilepsy among Laekenois dogs that were taken note of, though, efforts are being undertaken to alleviate the problem. But generally, Laekenois is considered a non-problematic dog breed and is not that vulnerable to fatal diseases. In fact, minor health conditions, like eye problems as well as hip and elbow dysplasia, are among the few concerns.
Living Conditions Leakenois would do better if it constantly mingles with people and other pets, that is, if it is socialized and trained properly. As such, Laekenois has a potential of becoming a companion dog. It can live both indoors and outdoors, and can stand almost any weather, but specifically likes cold atmosphere. Moreover, it is highly advisable if Laekenois lives with the owners. In fact, an apartment can be a good home for the dog.
Exercise Requirements
Laekenois is an active dog that needs to be regularly exercised. As such, it needs to do daily walks and other energetic activities.
Training Requirements Laekenois is an intelligent dog, and therefore can be easily trained. It needs solid, firm training but not suffocating enough to make it impatient and rather stubborn. It would also be important to show authority during the training for Laekenois can be somewhat uncontrollable at times.
Life Expectancy Laekenois can live for 12 to 14 years.
Grooming
It is not at all tedious to groom Laekenois, especially since it requires little grooming efforts. What’s important is that Laekenois’ coat is trimmed twice a year and that proper combs are used to maintain the appearance of the coat. Bathing is also occasionally done.
When the content is redone to a better standard by another writer it will be here Belgian Shepherd Laekenois Dog.
Here's the other breed they did:
Belgian Shepherd Dog (Malinois)
Origin/History Like other Belgian Shepherd Dog varieties, Malinois originated from Belgium; in fact, it was named after Malines City. As a working dog, Malinois was first used in herding, and thus have proved early on its protection instincts.
Among the Belgian Shepherd Dog varieties, which include Laekenois, Tervuren, and Groenendael, Malinois was the first breed to develop a type.
Appearance Malinois is generally known for its “square” profile and erect ears. It is medium-sized, short-haired, with almond-shaped eyes. Malinois is often mistaken for German Shepherd, however, their differences in bone density, sensitivity, agility, and other body characteristics can tell which is Malinois and which is German Shepherd.
Colours Malionois appears in fawn, red, and grey. However, white patches on the chest and black hair tips appear on Malinois, thus making overlaying shades of colors.
Temperament At an early age, Malinois should be socialized and introduced to new places, especially since it has a tendency of becoming overwhelmingly shy. When properly trained, though, Malinois is smart, bold, outgoing, and child-friendly.
Common Health Problems As in the case of other dog breeds, Malinois is prone to develop hip and elbow dysplasia, allergies, and eye defects. Therefore, it would be necessary to assure that the Malinois puppy’s parents are both healthy.
Living Conditions Malinois can thrive well both outdoors and indoors. Apartments will work for the dog, but it might be better if it can once in a while spend time in huge spaces like parks and yards. Malinois prefers to be around people, so it would help if the owner takes the dog with him when doing his routine, say, exercising.
Exercise Requirements Malinois is a working dog, so it needs to be flexed and exercised regularly. It is advised that Malinois be engaged in long walks and other physical activities.
Training Requirements Socialization would be a fundamental part of Malinois training, and therefore, it must be exposed to different people, dogs, and places. Malinois is naturally receptive and intelligent that it can easily pick up new learning.
Life Expectancy Averagely, Malinois lives for 10 to 12 years.
Grooming Malinois is easily groomed. It only requires occasional bathing. However, it is important to brush its coat on a regular basis.
Again, when written to a better standard the information about this breed will be here: Belgian Shepherd Malinois Dog
Well, Im disappointed to say the quality is very poor.
The quality of the content is so very poor. It's so bad it's not as if I can offer a few pointers and put them on the right track. It certainly was written by the person who wrote my first 2 test dog breed pages.
Secondly, they used an old instruction sheet I had submitted, so they weren't written to my guidelines and had about 400 words each when I wanted more than that. Ok, so that was a mix up and from now on they will use the 2nd improved instruction sheet I had submitted.
Also, it wasn't the easiest of breeds to trial out, but still thats no excuse for the quality.
I won't comment any further you can read it for yourself.
Belgian Shepherd Dog (Laekenois)
Origin/History
Laekenois is only one-fourth of the varieties of Belgian Shepherd Dog. The other three breeds include Groenendael, Tervuren, and Malinois. Belgian Shepherd Dog Laekenois and the other varieties are originally from the different places in Belgium, from which they got their names.
Ontologically, Laekenois dogs are sturdy dogs that they were used as guard dogs in the fields. Though today, much of the jobs of Laekenois still involve protection, detection and other related functions.
Appearance
Laekenois is a woolly type of dog because of its seemingly rugged coat. It actually resembles other Belgian Shepherd Dog varieties’ characteristics except for its coat. Laekenois have dark eyes, black nose, and high ears.
Colours
Laekenois usually come in mahogany and fawn colors, though, white varieties also exist. Black patches over the body are also commonplace.
Temperament
Intelligence, sturdiness, and protective skills are very intrinsic to Laekenois, which is why it is partly used in herding and other guarding purposes. Though it appears so strong, Laekonois is affectionate and loyal. It welcomes and enjoys relationships; therefore, it must be socialized at an early age.
Common Health Problems
There were cases of epilepsy among Laekenois dogs that were taken note of, though, efforts are being undertaken to alleviate the problem. But generally, Laekenois is considered a non-problematic dog breed and is not that vulnerable to fatal diseases. In fact, minor health conditions, like eye problems as well as hip and elbow dysplasia, are among the few concerns.
Living Conditions Leakenois would do better if it constantly mingles with people and other pets, that is, if it is socialized and trained properly. As such, Laekenois has a potential of becoming a companion dog. It can live both indoors and outdoors, and can stand almost any weather, but specifically likes cold atmosphere. Moreover, it is highly advisable if Laekenois lives with the owners. In fact, an apartment can be a good home for the dog.
Exercise Requirements
Laekenois is an active dog that needs to be regularly exercised. As such, it needs to do daily walks and other energetic activities.
Training Requirements Laekenois is an intelligent dog, and therefore can be easily trained. It needs solid, firm training but not suffocating enough to make it impatient and rather stubborn. It would also be important to show authority during the training for Laekenois can be somewhat uncontrollable at times.
Life Expectancy Laekenois can live for 12 to 14 years.
Grooming
It is not at all tedious to groom Laekenois, especially since it requires little grooming efforts. What’s important is that Laekenois’ coat is trimmed twice a year and that proper combs are used to maintain the appearance of the coat. Bathing is also occasionally done.
When the content is redone to a better standard by another writer it will be here Belgian Shepherd Laekenois Dog.
Here's the other breed they did:
Belgian Shepherd Dog (Malinois)
Origin/History Like other Belgian Shepherd Dog varieties, Malinois originated from Belgium; in fact, it was named after Malines City. As a working dog, Malinois was first used in herding, and thus have proved early on its protection instincts.
Among the Belgian Shepherd Dog varieties, which include Laekenois, Tervuren, and Groenendael, Malinois was the first breed to develop a type.
Appearance Malinois is generally known for its “square” profile and erect ears. It is medium-sized, short-haired, with almond-shaped eyes. Malinois is often mistaken for German Shepherd, however, their differences in bone density, sensitivity, agility, and other body characteristics can tell which is Malinois and which is German Shepherd.
Colours Malionois appears in fawn, red, and grey. However, white patches on the chest and black hair tips appear on Malinois, thus making overlaying shades of colors.
Temperament At an early age, Malinois should be socialized and introduced to new places, especially since it has a tendency of becoming overwhelmingly shy. When properly trained, though, Malinois is smart, bold, outgoing, and child-friendly.
Common Health Problems As in the case of other dog breeds, Malinois is prone to develop hip and elbow dysplasia, allergies, and eye defects. Therefore, it would be necessary to assure that the Malinois puppy’s parents are both healthy.
Living Conditions Malinois can thrive well both outdoors and indoors. Apartments will work for the dog, but it might be better if it can once in a while spend time in huge spaces like parks and yards. Malinois prefers to be around people, so it would help if the owner takes the dog with him when doing his routine, say, exercising.
Exercise Requirements Malinois is a working dog, so it needs to be flexed and exercised regularly. It is advised that Malinois be engaged in long walks and other physical activities.
Training Requirements Socialization would be a fundamental part of Malinois training, and therefore, it must be exposed to different people, dogs, and places. Malinois is naturally receptive and intelligent that it can easily pick up new learning.
Life Expectancy Averagely, Malinois lives for 10 to 12 years.
Grooming Malinois is easily groomed. It only requires occasional bathing. However, it is important to brush its coat on a regular basis.
Again, when written to a better standard the information about this breed will be here: Belgian Shepherd Malinois Dog
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